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It broke through my chest today…
I’m still not sure what.
But I think I am dead
Or maybe just sad
If I let this pain go
Will it fly away and
Burn in the sun
Or just float above me till
I am gone…

Will I feel this way forever
Or until I find a new anchor
Tell me now I want answers
I might go crazy the pain
It feels like my chest is being
Crushed…

They said a broken heart stings
But mine feels like its been crushed
Smashed and blown into the wind
Maybe its just me I am a freak
that’s what I say
I think I will just keep walking
And let everything pop in the sun
Maybe then I can truly feel good
But I will never know…
©2009-2010 ~garyustobehear
:icongaryustobehear:

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Going through some crap right now hope you enjoy the poem please comment and rate

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:iconzaikxory:
It's a good poem, but try to look on the brighter side of things, okay dude?

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"If any of us were considered 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-Me

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:iconkiri-uchiha:
Awww... I love it... and i kno how u feel.. went thruogh that this summer...

but im here if u wanna talk... u have my AIM.. or just send an email to it and ill get back to ya ok??

don't worry... you'll get over this.. no matter how much u say or think u wont..!!! ^^ :glomp: :hug:

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"If any of us were 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-ZaikXory

:heart: 12-17-08 :heart:
:icongaryustobehear:
thanks but I already have everything already sorted out but thanks.

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fat people are the easiest to fight just kick there ankle and push them down a hill (the wont be able to get back up) ;)
:iconkiri-uchiha:
lol well that was fast.. XDD

wish i could do that!!

haha ur welcome and im glad :D

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"If any of us were 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-ZaikXory

:heart: 12-17-08 :heart:
:icongaryustobehear:
lol yea I get over things pretty fast...
and I'm thinking about posting a short story series up here on my page but idk what I want it to be about

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fat people are the easiest to fight just kick there ankle and push them down a hill (the wont be able to get back up) ;)
:iconkiri-uchiha:
oooooooooo!!! lol i wanna read it!! lmao

>.> srry.... im kinda hyper today.. lol

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"If any of us were 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-ZaikXory

:heart: 12-17-08 :heart:
:icongaryustobehear:
lol I'm still trying to think of what type of story line I want but when I finish the 1st chapter(or whatever I am gonna call them) feel free to read it

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fat people are the easiest to fight just kick there ankle and push them down a hill (the wont be able to get back up) ;)
:iconkiri-uchiha:
:D YAY!!! lol

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"If any of us were 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-ZaikXory

:heart: 12-17-08 :heart:
:icongaryustobehear:
YIPPPPPEEEEEEEEPPEEEEEE LOL

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fat people are the easiest to fight just kick there ankle and push them down a hill (the wont be able to get back up) ;)
:iconkiri-uchiha:
WWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDD

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"If any of us were 'normal' by society's standards, then none of us would be unique."-ZaikXory

:heart: 12-17-08 :heart:

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